Seven people went to a restaurant for dinner. They ordered y amount of plates that cost $9 each. Each payed $7 to pay equal amount. In addition, they chose to pay $4 as a tip to their waiter. How many plates did they order?
The story is very good, I liked the part about buying from a restaurant and other things like tips. I think it would have improved if you wrote that you gave the tip first, and then paid for the meal.
The information on where 7 goes isn't clear. The equation was fairly creative, but could improve more on wording. The story idea itself was understandable and visible. It is short and nice. Great Job!
The story flew well until the park that each payed $7 and the $4 as a tip to their waiter. It would have been better to say that each of the 7 people had to pay an equal amount of the dinner. The background as the restaurant was creative and overall the story was GOOD.
Seven people went to a restaurant for dinner. They ordered y amount of plates that cost $9 each. Each payed $7 to pay equal amount. In addition, they chose to pay $4 as a tip to their waiter. How many plates did they order?
ReplyDeleteThe story is very good, I liked the part about buying from a restaurant and other things like tips. I think it would have improved if you wrote that you gave the tip first, and then paid for the meal.
ReplyDeleteThe information on where 7 goes isn't clear. The equation was fairly creative, but could improve more on wording. The story idea itself was understandable and visible. It is short and nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!
The story flew well until the park that each payed $7 and the $4 as a tip to their waiter. It would have been better to say that each of the 7 people had to pay an equal amount of the dinner. The background as the restaurant was creative and overall the story was GOOD.
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